Sam Molli
10/3/2018 01:56:02 pm
I like the idea of opening the profile with unpacking the instrument. It would look really cool if you started zoomed in as the case opens and then progressively zoom out as it's unpacked. Secondly, I feel like panning across the band as they warm-up and practice would be a good shot that captures everything that is happening. Third, this may seem a little odd but I feel like placing the camera behind the water station or on the ground looking up would be an interesting angle that would be fun to shoot. Finally, to finish the profile I think that placing emphasis on the drum major during announcements while still being able to see the band in the background would be a captivating way to finish. Excited to see what life in the marching band is all about!
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Kelsey Beyeler
10/3/2018 01:57:21 pm
I like the fact that you begin the profile with a shot of instrument prep before diving in to the chaos/business of the whole band on the field. It's not that I think the other shots will be too busy, it's just nice to start off with something a bit simpler. How are you going to transition from frame to frame? I think using both fad-in and cut-to shots will be effective. I think putting marching band music over all this will be really cool. A random idea I had...what if you removed the music for the water break scene, to signify the contrast between loud chaotic moments of performances and the much-needed break-times and calmness in between? I think ending the video with sounds of cheering will be really cool and symbolic to represent the outcome of all the work that gets put in to a performance. This is a cool, unique idea!
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